I am looking for feedback on my Limit Hold'em book

[King Yao]

I am writing a book on Limit Hold'em which will be published by Pi Yee Press. Currently, I have the entire book available online at my site www.HoldemBrain.com There are no ads on the site, the entire purpose for the site is for me to get feedback from readers about my book. I am specifically looking for constructive criticsm, suggestions, problems, anything that can help me make the book better. I suspect the contents of the book will be up on the site for two to three weeks. After that I will take it offline and submit the final manuscript. Mason and Mat Sklansky gave me the go-ahead to make one post on 2+2 regarding my book. I appreciate that and want to say thanks.