Critique my "Betting Patterns" article

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Just threw the rough draft up on the webpage and wanted some input from you guys [img]/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

http://www.pokermentor.net/hpm_betting_patterns.html

sorry if it is a little hard to read at first, after some thinking I thought it was the simplest way to do it

Usually poker articles talk in the abstract but I thought it might be interesting to write something very concrete. What do you guys think of it, how do you think I should adjust it? Add/subtract anything?
thanks