Haiku Challenge - sex haiku

[jakethebake]

Your head pushed down hard.
Arching your back, ass circling.
Moaning, you take me.

[diebitter]

tongue to your nipples
feeling them grow, I suck soft
then hard, and then soft

They grow to my tongue
and I lick them still harder
Our eyes lock, deeply

I move down and kiss
your navel and your tummy
gliding lower still

Tongue tip on your clit
teasing and tasting you well
How I get harder

I lick those lips hard,
and my tongue moves inside you,
tasting your rich juice

You are ready so
I slip inside, hot and sweet
like dipping in oil

We move slow at first
back and forth but we can't stop
the heat that grows there

Faster we are [censored]
closer to that point that we
wish to get to now

You come and tense,
I tense and come inside you
I spurt so deeply

We relax and so
enfold one another and
lie in the dark, spent

The night is so dark
but we have each other to
hold and [censored] and sleep.

[diebitter]

My tongue, from the bud
of your ass to lips to clit,
Loves the taste of you

[Shajen]

[pc in NM]

She moans "[censored] me hard!!"
I dream 'double play relay'
I am still Da' Man!

[jakethebake]

Legs spread wide for me.
Vulnerable. All exposed.
Showing me your need.

[jakethebake]

Me pounding one hole.
Pink plastic in the other.
Moaning as you cum.

[TheCroShow]

[ QUOTE ]
Padding your post count
With unfunny sex haikus
Your haikus are crap

[/ QUOTE ]

Circle jerk at 1
With lame O-O-T morans
Go suck a dick Jake

WHOA WHOA a little harsh at the end, my bad dawg, had to pick a name. Anyway, this thread wasn't as good as I thought it would be. Had a read through and half the "haikus" do not fit the 5-7-5 format. most are awful, maybe 2 or 3 are really good. keep trying though! =D

[Los Feliz Slim]

I used to have sex.
Then my wife had a baby.
Now my balls are blue.

[jakethebake]

[ QUOTE ]
I used to have sex.
Then my wife had a baby.
Now my balls are blue.

[/ QUOTE ]

Been there. I feel for you, man. [img]/images/graemlins/frown.gif[/img]