Did I play this hand right???

[BlackMamba]

Game Started on Fri Jun 11, 2004 @ 17:45
Holdem NL-2 - Holdem - NL 0 - Play Money - Hand #27725713

**Hand #27725713 begins**
Dazell2000 receives the dealer button
Jordnpolice posts small blind 7
Covergirl posts big blind 15
You are dealt[9c,Ah]
Thedude calls 15
DAVIOII folds
Fastrack folds
Sneezie1 calls 15
2bullets raises 100
Hades457 calls 100
Yayiwin folds
Dazell2000 calls 100
Jordnpolice folds
Covergirl calls 85
Thedude calls 85
Sneezie1 calls 85
Flop is dealt [Qh,Ad,5d]
Covergirl checks
Thedude bets 15
Sneezie1 calls 15
2bullets calls 15
Hades457 raises 213
Dazell2000 folds
Covergirl folds
Thedude calls 198
Sneezie1 folds
2bullets folds
Turn is dealt [8h]
Thedude checks
Hades457 bets 373
Thedude calls 373
River is dealt [Kd]
Thedude bets 73
Hades457 goes all in 0
Hades457 raises 511
Thedude goes all in 0
Thedude calls 259
Hades457 shows a pair of Aces
Hades457's pocket cards were [9c,Ah]
Thedude shows a flush Ace high
Thedude's pocket cards were [7d,9d]
Thedude wins $2473 play money from main pot
**Hand #27725713 ends**

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[cferejohn]

1. Don't post hand histories. Find a converter or better yet, just translate the hands into 'english'. In this one, I can't even tell which player is you (Hades457?).

2. Assuming that is correct, don't call preflop raises with A9o. In fact, usually don't even call with A9o at all. Raising to steal when it is folded to you is fine (and I bet that happens alot in a freeroll [img]/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]).

3. Don't push on the river with ace-crappy kicker when there is a flush possible on the board.

Go buy Texas Hold'em for Advanced players and Theory of Poker and read them until you understand them. You are quite a ways from being a winning player if you even suspect that you played this hand correctly.

[salty]

Im afraid I have to agree with cfere here this is pretty horrible stuff,but dont let this criticism put you off posting,look at the hand again and regardless of whether its a free cash tourney or not realise that this was an awful play.

[salty]

http://www.selachian.com/tools/bison...hconverter.cgi

Try this converter for hand histories.They will read better.

[BlackMamba]

Just to let y'all know, and I hope y'all don't lose all self-respect y'all have for me as a player but the site I play on is for play money, which is why I called with a hand like this.