Rap/Hip Hop Fans tell me what you think.

[siccjay]

Just check this verse out. Tell me what you think. As you will hear, it's the beginning of a story type track.

Any comments are appreciated.

http://s41.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0...13L7Z89QLWU0HW

[smokingrobot]

can i trust you that this isnt a virus?

[smokingrobot]

also please keep these vida pics coming.

did you take these yourself? they dont look like it was a staged event...

[siccjay]

err why would I post a virus in a forum i read everyday for WAY TOO MANY hours a day

[Voltron87]

meh.

[siccjay]

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meh.

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good post

[smokingrobot]

which part did you contribute to?

the beat aint bad... dont recognize the sample (the one that carries the melody, or the repeated pattern that double times before the vocalist enters, is that an acoustic guitar w/ some filters or keyboard?), although i aint the best beat head out there.

it needs a new drum kit. these drums are pretty generic.

can we hear some more? is there going to be a hook?

[Voltron87]

the beat is not shabby at all, but the vocals are what make it meh.

[siccjay]

hah

its probably just some generic free internet beat

i was looking more for comments on the lyrics/delivery/content/ etc etc etc

i think the song is finished but not recorded in completion

comments in this thread may determine if it gets finished

[smokingrobot]

the vocalist has a familiar style to him.. although i couldnt put my finger yet on who i think it sounds like...

i still think the drums could be better.