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06-23-2005, 10:51 PM
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Volume I Corrections
Hi Everyone:
Here are the fixes we made to HOH: Volume I. Thanks to all of you who sent me corrections. best wishes, Mason Corrections in Volume I Page 6: Middle of page, “counter-clockwise” should be “clockwise.” Page 19: Line 6, needs period (or colon) after “decision-making” Page 20: Line 12, “full” should be “fell” 9th line from bottom, “will steadily shrink” should be “will shrink” Page 21: In footnote, “Reason being that you can” should be “Reason? You can ...” Page 22: “lesser” should be “lesser” Page 31: Line 12, “But was” should be “But it was” Page 39: Bottom of page, “conservatism, then you may ...” should be “conservatism. In that case, you may...” Page 41: Line 4: an aggressivbe will...” should be “an aggressive player will...” Page 47: “Example No. 2..” should be Example No. 2.” Page 68: 3/4 of way down page, “$70 chips...” should be “$70 ...” Page 78: Line 10, sentence beginning “You have a legitimate hand...” should be paragraph No. 1. Paragraphs 1-3 should be 2-4. Page 85: Top line “The Rounders” should be just “Rounders”. Page 94: In graphic the ace of diamonds should be an ace of clubs Page 105: 2nd to the last paragraph, “other” should be plural. Page 113: Line 5 should be a comma after the word “flop”. Page 122: Last line, eliminate the word “chips” page 137: 6 lines from bottom, eliminate the word “chips” page 139: First two paragraphs should not be in bold. Page 153: Line 1, insert $ sign, “375" should be “$375" Page 155: Second paragraph of answer. Player should be E, not C Page 170: The pot is now 720...” should be “The pot is now #840...” “It costs you $120 to call a pot of $720...” should be “It costs you $120 to call a pot of $840...” “Those 6-to-1 odds...” should be “Those 7-to-1 odds...” Page 185: With kong-queen I would play in all middle positions, with a mix of 60 percent raises and 40 percent folds” should be “...40 percent calls”. Page 192: “opener were” should be “opener was” Page 203: “three other” should be “three others” Page 208: “before the pot” should be “before the flop” Page: 219: “$110" should be “$130" “You raise $80" should be “you raise to $80" Page 223: Line 13, “... a tool for the players ...” should be “... a tool for the player ...” Page 255: 5th line from bottom: $1,570 chips” should be “$1,570" Page 256: Top line: “$670 chips” should be “$670" Page 258: 8 lines from bottom: $250 chips” should be $250" Page 272: “two-thirds of the flop” should be “two-thirds of the pot” Page 278: Line 5, after the second set of card pictures: “(With” should be “with” Page 283: “rather than me” should be “rather than I” Page 292: Line 3, “$240 chips” should be “$240" Page 293: 2nd line from bottom: “a weaker hands” should be “a weaker hand” Page 295: 8 lines from bottom: “to weak” should be “too weak” Page 297: “pair of aces take” should be “pair of aces takes” Page 310: 2nd line of footnote: “good playing opponent” should be “strong opponent” Page 313: 313 5th line from bottom: $40 to $80" should be “$60 to $80" Page 322: “your” on line 4 should be “you’re” “You’re” in Answer should be “You” Page 328: line 5 of Answer is missing “to” between “lose” and “one” Page 331: line 4 of fourth street answer, “checks” should be “chips” Page 345: “Part Six” should be “Part Four” Page 356: Changed B from $1,000 to $1,030 footnote should read “Heads-Up ...” Page 358: “five four” should be “five-four” Page 364: “guy to likes” should be “guy who likes” Page 366: 6th line from bottom: you goal with” should be “your goal with” 
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#2
06-23-2005, 11:00 PM
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Re: Volume I Corrections
U sir are a prince. Thank you.
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#4
06-24-2005, 12:40 AM
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Re: Volume I Corrections
Thanks much.
Correction to a correction: Page 22: "lessor" should be "lesser"
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#10
06-24-2005, 11:38 AM
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Re: Volume I Corrections
I'm not a NL player (and I havent even bothered to read HOH1 yet), but I would like to mark in the definitive errors on my 1st edition copy. Do I need to use the errors in this thread, or do I need to also cross reference the "HOH Exposed" errors? I do tend to agree that the mathematical errors are the most interesting to me, along with the grammatical errors that are so large that it could result in either incoherence or misunderstanding.
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