Fix this sentence

[shadow29]

I'm helping a friend write a cover letter for a marketing job in the golf industry. It's pretty much all done, but one of her sentences is bad, but I don't know why.

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I was very excited to hear of xxx's recent opening, and believe it to have a great deal of promise for becoming one of the state's premier courses.

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Oh and thanks:



edit- my friend is not one of these girls.

edit- rehosted