How many mistakes did I make?

[nomadtla]

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Thanks Drunk about making the post easier to read how would I go about doing that?

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Either one use the hand converter here's a link
Or two do it on your own with all the nifty symbols [img]/images/graemlins/spade.gif[/img] [img]/images/graemlins/diamond.gif[/img] [img]/images/graemlins/heart.gif[/img] [img]/images/graemlins/club.gif[/img] like so
Just look at a hand that has been done by the converter and replicate it or closely imitate it.

Though all of this hinges on getting the hand history from the site you play so that you can give an accurate setup for the hands.
General Rules:
1 Don't show results (causes results oriented thinking)
1b don't phrase your post in such a way that it gives
away the results if you can help it.
2 Ask particular questions if posible
3 Make your post as ledgible as posible, yours is not bad it's much better than just copying and pasting the hand history but it could deffinately improve.
4 add any thoughts as to why you played it the way you did, or particular acctions you've noticed in your villan (opponent reads)
5 make it as accurate as possible
6 If your question is very specific stop the action where you're question is.

Just look at some other posts and you'll get a feel for it I'm sure. Welcome to the micro's. You'll learn a lot if you listen to these guys and think things through with them.

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[DeathDonkey]

You are my typical opponent. I love you.

-DeathDonkey

[Jarcon]

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This is how you have got so many posts? [img]/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

[SavageMiser]

You must raise preflop. Tell yourself that it's OK to win the blinds uncontested. A fold is not to be feared. Sure it sucks if everyone bails on your AA, but it's a good deal when you're holding AJ.

[bozlax]

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Did I screw up every stage here?

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no, you got dealt AA.

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Aw, c'mon, Silk. He raised the turn.

[SnglMaltScotch]

I have a very simple preflop rule.

"Do no slowplay before the flop. PERIOD"

If you are in the sb with AA and it folded to you raise.

This is one of the very few "rules" that I have but you get burned way too often slowplaying before the flop.