10 hands for critique

[Gambler]

hought I'd post 10 hands to get some general feedback on my play. Any comments welcome. My poker tracker stats at the moment for $.50/$1 after about 2500 hands are Vp$IP 19%, PFR 7%, Post flop aggresion 2.95 Thanks.


Party Poker 0.5/1 Hold'em (9 handed) converter

Preflop: Hero is BB with J[img]/images/graemlins/spade.gif[/img], 9[img]/images/graemlins/diamond.gif[/img].
<font color="#666666">1 fold</font>, UTG+1 calls, <font color="#666666">1 fold</font>, MP2 calls, <font color="#666666">3 folds</font>, SB completes, Hero checks.

Flop: (4 SB) 9[img]/images/graemlins/club.gif[/img], 3[img]/images/graemlins/club.gif[/img], 6[img]/images/graemlins/diamond.gif[/img]


<font color="#0000FF">(4 players)</font>
SB checks, <font color="#CC3333">Hero bets</font>, UTG+1 folds, MP2 folds, SB folds.

Final Pot: 2.50 BB


Party Poker 0.5/1 Hold'em (9 handed) converter

Preflop: Hero is SB with K[img]/images/graemlins/spade.gif[/img], T[img]/images/graemlins/diamond.gif[/img].
<font color="#666666">4 folds</font>, MP3 calls, <font color="#666666">2 folds</font>, <font color="#CC3333">Hero raises</font>, BB calls, MP3 calls.

Flop: (6 SB) 7[img]/images/graemlins/club.gif[/img], 2[img]/images/graemlins/diamond.gif[/img], 5[img]/images/graemlins/club.gif[/img] <font color="#0000FF">(3 players)</font>
Hero checks, BB checks, MP3 checks.

Turn: (3 BB) K[img]/images/graemlins/club.gif[/img] <font color="#0000FF">(3 players)</font>
<font color="#CC3333">Hero bets</font>, BB folds, MP3 folds.

Final Pot: 4 BB


Party Poker 0.5/1 Hold'em (9 handed) converter

Preflop: Hero is Button with 8[img]/images/graemlins/club.gif[/img], T[img]/images/graemlins/club.gif[/img].
<font color="#666666">5 folds</font>, CO calls, <font color="#666666">1 fold</font>, SB completes, BB checks.



Party Poker 0.5/1 Hold'em (9 handed) converter

Preflop: Hero is CO with 8[img]/images/graemlins/diamond.gif[/img], 7[img]/images/graemlins/club.gif[/img]. MP1 posts a blind of $0.75.
<font color="#CC3333">UTG raises</font>, <font color="#666666">1 fold</font>, MP1 (poster) calls, <font color="#666666">3 folds</font>, Button calls, SB calls, <font color="#666666">1 fold</font>.




Party Poker 0.5/1 Hold'em (9 handed) converter

Preflop: Hero is MP3 with A[img]/images/graemlins/heart.gif[/img], 4[img]/images/graemlins/club.gif[/img].
<font color="#666666">1 fold</font>, UTG+1 calls, <font color="#666666">1 fold</font>, <font color="#CC3333">MP2 raises</font>, <font color="#666666">5 folds</font>, UTG+1 calls.




Party Poker 0.5/1 Hold'em (10 handed) converter

Preflop: Hero is BB with T[img]/images/graemlins/spade.gif[/img], Q[img]/images/graemlins/club.gif[/img].
UTG calls, <font color="#666666">5 folds</font>, CO calls, <font color="#666666">1 fold</font>, SB completes, Hero checks.

Flop: (4 SB) Q[img]/images/graemlins/diamond.gif[/img], T[img]/images/graemlins/heart.gif[/img], A[img]/images/graemlins/heart.gif[/img] <font color="#0000FF">(4 players)</font>
SB checks, <font color="#CC3333">Hero bets</font>, UTG calls, <font color="#CC3333">CO raises</font>, SB folds, <font color="#CC3333">Hero 3-bets</font>, UTG calls, CO calls.

Turn: (6.50 BB) 2[img]/images/graemlins/spade.gif[/img] <font color="#0000FF">(3 players)</font>
<font color="#CC3333">Hero bets</font>, UTG calls, <font color="#CC3333">CO raises</font>, <font color="#CC3333">Hero 3-bets</font>, UTG calls, <font color="#CC3333">CO caps</font>, Hero calls, UTG calls.

River: (18.50 BB) 2[img]/images/graemlins/club.gif[/img] <font color="#0000FF">(3 players)</font>
<font color="#CC3333">Hero bets</font>, UTG folds, <font color="#CC3333">CO raises</font>, Hero calls.

Final Pot: 22.50 BB


Party Poker 0.5/1 Hold'em (10 handed) converter

Preflop: Hero is UTG with Q[img]/images/graemlins/spade.gif[/img], A[img]/images/graemlins/diamond.gif[/img].
<font color="#CC3333">Hero raises</font>, <font color="#666666">3 folds</font>, MP2 calls, MP3 calls, <font color="#666666">1 fold</font>, Button calls, SB calls, <font color="#666666">1 fold</font>.

Flop: (11 SB) 3[img]/images/graemlins/heart.gif[/img], 4[img]/images/graemlins/spade.gif[/img], K[img]/images/graemlins/heart.gif[/img] <font color="#0000FF">(5 players)</font>
SB checks, Hero checks, MP2 checks, MP3 checks, <font color="#CC3333">Button bets</font>, SB folds, Hero folds


Party Poker 0.5/1 Hold'em (10 handed) converter

Preflop: Hero is SB with 2[img]/images/graemlins/spade.gif[/img], 2[img]/images/graemlins/club.gif[/img].
<font color="#666666">2 folds</font>, UTG+2 calls, MP1 calls, MP2 calls, <font color="#666666">3 folds</font>, Hero completes, BB checks.

Flop: (5 SB) K[img]/images/graemlins/spade.gif[/img], J[img]/images/graemlins/heart.gif[/img], 4[img]/images/graemlins/heart.gif[/img] <font color="#0000FF">(5 players)</font>
Hero checks, <font color="#CC3333">BB bets</font>, UTG+2 calls, MP1 calls, MP2 calls, Hero folds.




Party Poker 0.5/1 Hold'em (9 handed) converter

Preflop: Hero is MP1 with A[img]/images/graemlins/heart.gif[/img], K[img]/images/graemlins/spade.gif[/img].
<font color="#666666">1 fold</font>, UTG+1 calls, <font color="#CC3333">Hero raises</font>, MP2 calls, <font color="#666666">4 folds</font>, BB calls, UTG+1 calls.

Flop: (8.50 SB) Q[img]/images/graemlins/spade.gif[/img], Q[img]/images/graemlins/diamond.gif[/img], 3[img]/images/graemlins/diamond.gif[/img] <font color="#0000FF">(4 players)</font>
BB checks, UTG+1 checks, Hero checks, <font color="#CC3333">MP2 bets</font>, BB folds, UTG+1 folds, Hero folds.




Party Poker 0.5/1 Hold'em (8 handed) converter

Preflop: Hero is MP2 with K[img]/images/graemlins/heart.gif[/img], Q[img]/images/graemlins/club.gif[/img].
<font color="#666666">3 folds</font>, <font color="#CC3333">Hero raises</font>, <font color="#666666">2 folds</font>, SB calls, <font color="#666666">1 fold</font>.

Flop: (5 SB) 3[img]/images/graemlins/spade.gif[/img], 2[img]/images/graemlins/club.gif[/img], 3[img]/images/graemlins/heart.gif[/img] <font color="#0000FF">(2 players)</font>
SB checks, <font color="#CC3333">Hero bets</font>, SB calls.

Turn: (3.50 BB) Q[img]/images/graemlins/spade.gif[/img] <font color="#0000FF">(2 players)</font>
SB checks, <font color="#CC3333">Hero bets</font>, SB folds.

Final Pot: 4.50 BB

[btspider]

first 5 are fine.

when posting multiple hands, please stop the action when you fold, label the hands, and cut out the final pot size and any other info that makes the post longer and less readable.

[Gambler]

Edited per your suggestions. What about the next 5, not so good? I know I misplayed the QT hand....

[cowboyzfan]

Party Poker 0.5/1 Hold'em (9 handed) converter

Preflop: Hero is MP3 with A, 4.
1 fold, UTG+1 calls, 1 fold, MP2 raises, 5 folds, UTG+1 calls.



Flop: (5.50 SB) 8, 4, Q (2 players)
UTG+1 bets, MP2 raises, UTG+1 calls.

Turn: (4.75 BB) A (2 players)
UTG+1 bets, MP2 folds.



Final Pot: 5.75 BB

this looks like a very loose pre flop call if you are UTG+1, or a horrible turn fold if you are MP2. Of course it says you are MP3 so who knows.

ok, you folded A4 in MP3 that is fine. I got confused. [img]/images/graemlins/crazy.gif[/img]

[Gambler]

bump for a few more responses. Thanks

[timprov]

1-5, 8, and 10 are fine.

QT: I call the turn raise and check-fold this river. I have a hard time seeing what you could be ahead of here.

AK and AQ: looks like you're just knuckling under to a positional autobet in both of these hands.

[Gambler]

I definitely overplayed the QT hand. On the AQ and AK hand I have 3 opponents and not even a backdoor draw working (well I had a backdoor wheel draw with AQ but come on.) These seemed too weak to bet the flop. Are you saying call one on the flop or bet out?

[timprov]

I'm not entirely sure you should be playing them differently. But I think there's a good chance you folded the best hand, especially with the AK.

I probably do what you did in the AQ hand, and in the AK either bet out the flop or call and bluff c/r the turn. Then again, I'm kind of a nut.