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Old 06-23-2005, 10:51 PM
Mason Malmuth Mason Malmuth is offline
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Default Volume I Corrections

Hi Everyone:

Here are the fixes we made to HOH: Volume I. Thanks to all of you who sent me corrections.

best wishes,
Mason

Corrections in Volume I

Page 6: Middle of page, “counter-clockwise” should be “clockwise.”

Page 19: Line 6, needs period (or colon) after “decision-making”

Page 20: Line 12, “full” should be “fell”

9th line from bottom, “will steadily shrink” should be “will shrink”

Page 21: In footnote, “Reason being that you can” should be “Reason? You can ...”

Page 22: “lesser” should be “lesser”

Page 31: Line 12, “But was” should be “But it was”

Page 39: Bottom of page, “conservatism, then you may ...” should be “conservatism. In that case, you may...”

Page 41: Line 4: an aggressivbe will...” should be “an aggressive player will...”

Page 47: “Example No. 2..” should be Example No. 2.”

Page 68: 3/4 of way down page, “$70 chips...” should be “$70 ...”

Page 78: Line 10, sentence beginning “You have a legitimate hand...” should be paragraph No. 1. Paragraphs 1-3 should be 2-4.

Page 85: Top line “The Rounders” should be just “Rounders”.

Page 94: In graphic the ace of diamonds should be an ace of clubs

Page 105: 2nd to the last paragraph, “other” should be plural.

Page 113: Line 5 should be a comma after the word “flop”.

Page 122: Last line, eliminate the word “chips”

page 137: 6 lines from bottom, eliminate the word “chips”

page 139: First two paragraphs should not be in bold.

Page 153: Line 1, insert $ sign, “375" should be “$375"

Page 155: Second paragraph of answer. Player should be E, not C

Page 170: The pot is now 720...” should be “The pot is now #840...”

“It costs you $120 to call a pot of $720...” should be “It costs you $120 to call a pot of $840...”

“Those 6-to-1 odds...” should be “Those 7-to-1 odds...”

Page 185: With kong-queen I would play in all middle positions, with a mix of 60 percent raises and 40 percent folds” should be “...40 percent calls”.

Page 192: “opener were” should be “opener was”

Page 203: “three other” should be “three others”

Page 208: “before the pot” should be “before the flop”

Page: 219: “$110" should be “$130"

“You raise $80" should be “you raise to $80"

Page 223: Line 13, “... a tool for the players ...” should be “... a tool for the player ...”

Page 255: 5th line from bottom: $1,570 chips” should be “$1,570"

Page 256: Top line: “$670 chips” should be “$670"

Page 258: 8 lines from bottom: $250 chips” should be $250"

Page 272: “two-thirds of the flop” should be “two-thirds of the pot”

Page 278: Line 5, after the second set of card pictures: “(With” should be “with”

Page 283: “rather than me” should be “rather than I”

Page 292: Line 3, “$240 chips” should be “$240"

Page 293: 2nd line from bottom: “a weaker hands” should be “a weaker hand”

Page 295: 8 lines from bottom: “to weak” should be “too weak”

Page 297: “pair of aces take” should be “pair of aces takes”

Page 310: 2nd line of footnote: “good playing opponent” should be “strong opponent”

Page 313: 313 5th line from bottom: $40 to $80" should be “$60 to $80"

Page 322: “your” on line 4 should be “you’re”
“You’re” in Answer should be “You”

Page 328: line 5 of Answer is missing “to” between “lose” and “one”

Page 331: line 4 of fourth street answer, “checks” should be “chips”

Page 345: “Part Six” should be “Part Four”

Page 356: Changed B from $1,000 to $1,030

footnote should read “Heads-Up ...”

Page 358: “five four” should be “five-four”

Page 364: “guy to likes” should be “guy who likes”

Page 366: 6th line from bottom: you goal with” should be “your goal with”
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