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Alas...Girls...*sigh*
I'm kind of looking for a girl's opinion on this. Also people that have actually been with girls and/or talked to them before because this is really serious.
So my goal is to win back this girl. I don't talk to her at all anymore, and I attempt to avoid every situation that has her present. So I wrote her a poem. I plan to slip it under her door or maybe IM her it from my friend's SN. I just want to some criticism on the poem, as well as the idea altogether. Are there any other alternatives? Here is the poem. I think i'm going to title it "Afternoon Delight," because that's what i used to always call her because we hung out in the afternoon alot. AFTERNOON DELIGHT I dreamt of comparing you to something, anything But no midsummer day could do Undeniably that would be unfair to you For you are far more beautiful than anything I have seen More warmth comes from you then any volcano that dares to blow You are the reason why the sun desires to come up For one gaze at you is a glimpse at the heavens And of course, why the moon shines so brightly Thinking of you makes the flowers bloom So bright and livid they have become If only they could be by you For then they could be the epitome of you Still nothing attests to the prettiness of your eyes More outstanding then the deepest ocean Your hair so straight and perfect Every single strand perfectly picked Only the best and most perfect can touch you Or even be around you Thus alone I will be forever |
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