Alas...Girls...*sigh*

Aren'tIFunny · #1 03-12-2005, 05:27 PM

I'm kind of looking for a girl's opinion on this. Also people that have actually been with girls and/or talked to them before because this is really serious.

So my goal is to win back this girl. I don't talk to her at all anymore, and I attempt to avoid every situation that has her present. So I wrote her a poem. I plan to slip it under her door or maybe IM her it from my friend's SN. I just want to some criticism on the poem, as well as the idea altogether. Are there any other alternatives?

Here is the poem. I think i'm going to title it "Afternoon Delight," because that's what i used to always call her because we hung out in the afternoon alot.

AFTERNOON DELIGHT

I dreamt of comparing you to something, anything But no midsummer day could do Undeniably that would be unfair to you
For you are far more beautiful than anything I have seen
More warmth comes from you then any volcano that dares to blow
You are the reason why the sun desires to come up
For one gaze at you is a glimpse at the heavens
And of course, why the moon shines so brightly
Thinking of you makes the flowers bloom
So bright and livid they have become
If only they could be by you
For then they could be the epitome of you
Still nothing attests to the prettiness of your eyes
More outstanding then the deepest ocean
Your hair so straight and perfect
Every single strand perfectly picked
Only the best and most perfect can touch you
Or even be around you
Thus alone I will be forever

[censored] · #2 03-12-2005, 05:34 PM

Dude, just move on. No girl is worth "trying to win back" if she is not as equally interested in you the seriously F her. Plenty of girls out there man.

Aren'tIFunny · #3 03-12-2005, 05:46 PM

You clearly have no idea what you are talking about, they have a whole music genre devoted to this entire topic of winning back girls. You clearly have never heard any Deathcab For Cutie songs. I myself own several undersized Deathcab For Cutie t-shirts.

This is really important to me, as this poem maybe perhaps the turning point of my entire life.

JGalt · #4 03-12-2005, 05:50 PM

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You clearly have no idea what you are talking about, they have a whole music genre devoted to this entire topic of winning back girls. You clearly have never heard any Deathcab For Cutie songs. I myself own several undersized Deathcab For Cutie t-shirts.

This is really important to me, as this poem maybe perhaps the turning point of my entire life.

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If it is important to you, then you have to do what you have to do. If it works then great, but do me a favour, if you it backfires horribly, don't kick yourself in the ass or feel like a knob for doing it. I know to many people who have tried to win girls back and can't move on and it has crippled them emotionaly.

[censored] · #5 03-12-2005, 05:53 PM

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I know to many people who have tried to win girls back and can't move on and it has crippled them emotionaly.

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Exactly, that's all I'm trying to say. Just stay balanced while you are doing this. It may not seem like it now but there are tons of girls out there just as great as this one. But if you stay hung up, you will never give yourself a chance to find them.

JGalt · #6 03-12-2005, 06:07 PM

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I know to many people who have tried to win girls back and can't move on and it has crippled them emotionaly.

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Exactly, that's all I'm trying to say. Just stay balanced while you are doing this. It may not seem like it now but there are tons of girls out there just as great as this one. But if you stay hung up, you will never give yourself a chance to find them.

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Very wise advice. But I am getting the impression this is a troll post. First time poster, his name and topic of discussion.

[censored] · #7 03-12-2005, 05:50 PM

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You clearly have no idea what you are talking about, I myself own several undersized Deathcab For Cutie t-shirts.

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Ya man, I clearly don't

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This is really important to me, as this poem maybe perhaps the turning point of my entire life.

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Good luck then, but seriously if you really feel that way you need to get a grip.

shant · #8 03-12-2005, 05:55 PM

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You clearly have no idea what you are talking about, they have a whole music genre devoted to this entire topic of winning back girls. You clearly have never heard any Deathcab For Cutie songs. I myself own several undersized Deathcab For Cutie t-shirts.

This is really important to me, as this poem maybe perhaps the turning point of my entire life.

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I believed the first post but thought the dude was gay. This second post clearly shows it's a troll making fun of "emo" types. The undersized shirt thing was a dead giveaway. You suck.

[censored] · #9 03-12-2005, 05:57 PM

ya you're right. That's sort of funny now.

what is an emo?

AngryCola · #10 03-12-2005, 06:00 PM

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what is an emo?

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I have no idea who this guy is.