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Critique my bubble play, please!
Maybe this is a bit excessive, but it's only six hands after we got down to four. I'm just really struggling on the button now -- I think it's mostly variance, but it feels like every decision I make is wrong.
I literally don't know what happened to my stack in these six hands. Mostly I think it was that I had a big hand (especially 4 handed) that didn't hit. Anyway, please share your critiques. In each bold line I'll give my position and the stacks starting with mine. Where I raise, I'm putting the amount I raise to, i.e. make it ____ to go, not the amount I raise by. Pacific $4 + $0.50 sit-and-go (20 seats), four handed action 1 SB T2812 T4080 T2730 T6287 A[img]/images/graemlins/heart.gif[/img] 9 [img]/images/graemlins/diamond.gif[/img] <font class="small">Code:</font><hr /><pre> fold fold r 600 fold</pre><hr /> 2 Bn T3012 T3880 T2730 T6287 6 [img]/images/graemlins/club.gif[/img] 2 [img]/images/graemlins/diamond.gif[/img] <font class="small">Code:</font><hr /><pre> fold fold (further action omitted) </pre><hr /> Comment: I'd like to be aggressive on button, but this is too bad to play. 3 UTG T3012 T3080 T3430 T6078 J [img]/images/graemlins/diamond.gif[/img] 5 [img]/images/graemlins/diamond.gif[/img] <font class="small">Code:</font><hr /><pre> r 600 fold fold call</pre><hr /> flop: 2[img]/images/graemlins/spade.gif[/img] 5[img]/images/graemlins/spade.gif[/img] T[img]/images/graemlins/spade.gif[/img] (pot: T1300) <font class="small">Code:</font><hr /><pre> check bet 600 ... fold</pre><hr /> 4 BB T3712 T3080 T3430 T5678 A [img]/images/graemlins/club.gif[/img] J[img]/images/graemlins/spade.gif[/img] <font class="small">Code:</font><hr /><pre> fold limp complete r to 800 ... call fold</pre><hr /> flop: T[img]/images/graemlins/diamond.gif[/img] 5[img]/images/graemlins/heart.gif[/img] 3[img]/images/graemlins/heart.gif[/img] <font class="small">Code:</font><hr /><pre> bet 800 call</pre><hr /> turn: K [img]/images/graemlins/heart.gif[/img] <font class="small">Code:</font><hr /><pre> check ... bet 600 call</pre><hr /> river: 6 [img]/images/graemlins/heart.gif[/img] <font class="small">Code:</font><hr /><pre> check ... check</pre><hr /> opponent shows: K [img]/images/graemlins/diamond.gif[/img] T [img]/images/graemlins/heart.gif[/img] for flush Comment: No excuse for this. Calling his bet was pretty silly -- I figured he was bluffing on the flush card so an ace, queen, or probably jack not of [img]/images/graemlins/heart.gif[/img] would win a big pot -- so chalk up T600 to stupid play. 5 SB T1512 T3080 T5830 T5478 7 [img]/images/graemlins/heart.gif[/img] 4 [img]/images/graemlins/diamond.gif[/img] <font class="small">Code:</font><hr /><pre> fold fold fold (walkover)</pre><hr /> Comment: too bad to play again. 6 Bn T1412 T3180 T5830 T5478 6 [img]/images/graemlins/diamond.gif[/img] 2 [img]/images/graemlins/diamond.gif[/img] <font class="small">Code:</font><hr /><pre> fold r 600 fold call</pre><hr /> Flop: 2[img]/images/graemlins/club.gif[/img] 7[img]/images/graemlins/heart.gif[/img] T[img]/images/graemlins/club.gif[/img] <font class="small">Code:</font><hr /><pre> check b 812 (all-in) call </pre><hr /> Sorry for the formatting... hopefully the action should be pretty clear with only four. Am I overplaying marginal hands? Failing to steal with any two where I should? Perhaps I'm not adjusting for my successful steals giving me a more aggressive table image, so that I'm sure to get called when I open-raise with any two suited? I'm just at a loss as to how to make bubble play work. Thanks in advance. |
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Re: Critique my bubble play, please!
That's pretty unreadable
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Re: Critique my bubble play, please!
Ack, sorry, I tried both putting code and non-code attributes in there, and neither way was as clear as my plain text. I'll try to rewrite it when I get back from AC because I really do value others' input.
I'll ask a question in words, then. Aggression on the button with 62s with the small stack after building a somewhat aggressive table image four-handed is probably not a good idea, right? (I think the AJ hand was probably OK, just didn't hit.) Anyway, thanks for trying. |
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