What sort of hands do you think the UTG is limping in with?

The problem I see here is that its very likely the UTG has a queen, so he's not folding in this hand. In the case that he has a 9, he just got trips.

As a result, your semi bluff to knock out people and clean up your outs doesnt make sense at all. It doesnt look like you will win this hand with a pair of tens or jacks.

All that knocking those players out of the pot does it make their chance of calling the turn and river absolutely zero. On the turn this gives you worse pot odds to hit your straight. On the river, this gives you less people to potentially pay you off.