Volume I Corrections
Hi Everyone:
Here are the fixes we made to HOH: Volume I. Thanks to all of you who sent me corrections.
best wishes,
Mason
Corrections in Volume I
Page 6: Middle of page, “counter-clockwise” should be “clockwise.”
Page 19: Line 6, needs period (or colon) after “decision-making”
Page 20: Line 12, “full” should be “fell”
9th line from bottom, “will steadily shrink” should be “will shrink”
Page 21: In footnote, “Reason being that you can” should be “Reason? You can ...”
Page 22: “lesser” should be “lesser”
Page 31: Line 12, “But was” should be “But it was”
Page 39: Bottom of page, “conservatism, then you may ...” should be “conservatism. In that case, you may...”
Page 41: Line 4: an aggressivbe will...” should be “an aggressive player will...”
Page 47: “Example No. 2..” should be Example No. 2.”
Page 68: 3/4 of way down page, “$70 chips...” should be “$70 ...”
Page 78: Line 10, sentence beginning “You have a legitimate hand...” should be paragraph No. 1. Paragraphs 1-3 should be 2-4.
Page 85: Top line “The Rounders” should be just “Rounders”.
Page 94: In graphic the ace of diamonds should be an ace of clubs
Page 105: 2nd to the last paragraph, “other” should be plural.
Page 113: Line 5 should be a comma after the word “flop”.
Page 122: Last line, eliminate the word “chips”
page 137: 6 lines from bottom, eliminate the word “chips”
page 139: First two paragraphs should not be in bold.
Page 153: Line 1, insert $ sign, “375" should be “$375"
Page 155: Second paragraph of answer. Player should be E, not C
Page 170: The pot is now 720...” should be “The pot is now #840...”
“It costs you $120 to call a pot of $720...” should be “It costs you $120 to call a pot of $840...”
“Those 6-to-1 odds...” should be “Those 7-to-1 odds...”
Page 185: With kong-queen I would play in all middle positions, with a mix of 60 percent raises and 40 percent folds” should be “...40 percent calls”.
Page 192: “opener were” should be “opener was”
Page 203: “three other” should be “three others”
Page 208: “before the pot” should be “before the flop”
Page: 219: “$110" should be “$130"
“You raise $80" should be “you raise to $80"
Page 223: Line 13, “... a tool for the players ...” should be “... a tool for the player ...”
Page 255: 5th line from bottom: $1,570 chips” should be “$1,570"
Page 256: Top line: “$670 chips” should be “$670"
Page 258: 8 lines from bottom: $250 chips” should be $250"
Page 272: “two-thirds of the flop” should be “two-thirds of the pot”
Page 278: Line 5, after the second set of card pictures: “(With” should be “with”
Page 283: “rather than me” should be “rather than I”
Page 292: Line 3, “$240 chips” should be “$240"
Page 293: 2nd line from bottom: “a weaker hands” should be “a weaker hand”
Page 295: 8 lines from bottom: “to weak” should be “too weak”
Page 297: “pair of aces take” should be “pair of aces takes”
Page 310: 2nd line of footnote: “good playing opponent” should be “strong opponent”
Page 313: 313 5th line from bottom: $40 to $80" should be “$60 to $80"
Page 322: “your” on line 4 should be “you’re”
“You’re” in Answer should be “You”
Page 328: line 5 of Answer is missing “to” between “lose” and “one”
Page 331: line 4 of fourth street answer, “checks” should be “chips”
Page 345: “Part Six” should be “Part Four”
Page 356: Changed B from $1,000 to $1,030
footnote should read “Heads-Up ...”
Page 358: “five four” should be “five-four”
Page 364: “guy to likes” should be “guy who likes”
Page 366: 6th line from bottom: you goal with” should be “your goal with”
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