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Looks fine to me. Feels like MP is checking a straight. If he calls at least you have several outs to still pick up the pot.

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After the river you have outs? Suspect you did not
read the post correctly.

The play is high read/experience dependant. Will it
work often enough to be +EV in the long run is all
you care about, I don't have enough info to make
a judgment.