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Old 08-09-2005, 03:02 PM
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Default Re: Fix this sentence
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I was very excited to hear of xxx's recent opening, and believe it will become one of the state's premier courses.

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I was very excited to hear of xxx's recent opening, and believe this course has the potential to be a premier golf destination.

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