Re: Rap/Hip Hop Fans tell me what you think.
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i was looking more for comments on the lyrics/delivery/content/ etc etc etc
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I kinda like it. I think he has a good voice/style to him, and I am interested in the story so far. I'd like to hear the rest of the track.
My main problem with it is the rhyming. His rhyme scheme is too simple, only rhyming 1 syllable usually, and sometimes not even that.
Too many 'kind of' rhymes for me, like 'ousted' and 'outlet' , 'into' and 'want to' etc. I think it's totally okay to make 'close' rhymes when they are part of a 3+ syllable rhyme, but not when they are on their own. Does that make sense?
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