Thread: Fix this sentence
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Old 08-09-2005, 09:14 PM
ddubois ddubois is offline
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Default Re: Fix this sentence
The sentence does not have a comma splice, since it has an appropriate conjunction. I don't see anything that is technically gramatically incorrect, but it doesn't flow well.
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