Thanks for the link to the covereter.

Judging by the lack of responses, maybe my line isn't so bad. Teh 2 questiosn I really had were:

1) Is it better to raise the turn when my draw got stronger?

2) Does my river raise look too much like a missed draw? Now, there is obviously no way this would work in this case b/c villian has a made hand. But against a weaker holding, can this line work?