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Old 09-22-2005, 11:04 PM
chezlaw chezlaw is offline
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Default Re: A problem with some religous views Part 2.

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although they may not know which ones to believe'

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I would change the words “which ones” to “which of the 3” it is a bit less confusing. At first I thought you might have meant which other religion to believe - but that was my error on first read.

But, so far I don’t see any flaw - other than the verbage itself (could be worded better, not saying I could, but when you are done, I’ll help out if needed) but not your question.

I’ll be interested to see if I missed any flaws so far.

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but that's what is says [img]/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

All help with clarity is greatly appreciated.

chez
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