[IggyWH]

There was only one part I couldn't stand. I don't know animation, but I would seriously consider changing it since it just seemed completely out of place.

The guy is having a flashback telling his buddy what has happened. The dog throws the guy, he hits the ground, gets up and then in the background the flashback is over with the 2 guys talking in present time again. Yet, the animation is still in the flashback on the guy on the ground getting up and walking away.

I was left sitting here at first wondering if there was a mistake... did you forget to put the other guy in? Why isn't the guys lips moving since he's talking. I then realised you were still in the flashback.

It's just my opinion... but I thought that was really a poor choice of staying in the flashback when it's over and the present conversation is going on.