Re: Sweet lord, I just finished a huge project.
Since you just finished ten weeks of work, I'm going to hold back a bit.
Starting with a positive comment should help. The voice acting seemed very good.
The animation had what I think is a flaw. The characters clothing didn't have any contrast with their skin. It was a bad visual.
Of course, the real problem is the story. I'm not sure what motivated you to make film about a dog watching pornography with an OC cast member. But, don't let that be your motivation for future projects. It was a poor choice, especially for something going to be seen by a school faculty.
And, comedy might not be your area of expertise.
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