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you used the wrong there, the wrong your, i bet if i kept looking, the wrong its. there's run on sentences, tense changes, and all that stuff english teachers mark down for. not to mention unnecessary cliches in almost every paragraph. i'll give you a 72/100. not bad.

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Thanks alot, I'll look into that, as you can tell my english is pretty poor.