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tbach24 09-03-2005 02:32 PM

\"as long as you feel it should be\"
 
stupid assignments with vagueness and "as long as you feel it should be" or whatever they say are going to be the death of me. i'm currently working on some work for my us history class and all my answers seem either too long or too short. if there are any teachers here please feel free to express your sorriness for the amount of frustruation you cause.

and school hasn't even began this year. i think i'm going to be in for a long year..

tbach24 09-03-2005 02:33 PM

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trying2learn 09-03-2005 02:34 PM

Re: \"as long as you feel it should be\"
 
my wife is a teacher, and when you put a word limit on things, you often get garbage that comes out to exactly that amount of words.

be grateful that they've given you this guideline...and now answer to the best of your ability.

Lazymeatball 09-03-2005 02:34 PM

Re: \"as long as you feel it should be\"
 
it means three pages double spaced, and if your teacher is old, you can inflate the margins a little. Also, if I recall correctly, Arial is slightly larger than Times New Roman.

tbach24 09-03-2005 02:35 PM

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it means three pages double spaced, and if your teacher is old, you can inflate the margins a little. Also, if I recall correctly, Arial is slightly larger than Times New Roman.

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This is all true. Except that I have 8 questions to answer and they don't say "short answer" or "essay" or "one word, no more"

Edge34 09-03-2005 02:40 PM

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I like these simply because I don't need to force a bunch of words out that do nothing to improve my answer.

Use the shortest answer you can that gets the correct information in.

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Randy_Refeld 09-03-2005 02:41 PM

Re: \"as long as you feel it should be\"
 
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it means three pages double spaced, and if your teacher is old, you can inflate the margins a little. Also, if I recall correctly, Arial is slightly larger than Times New Roman.

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This is all true. Except that I have 8 questions to answer and they don't say "short answer" or "essay" or "one word, no more"

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Just answer the question. Part of higher learning is being able to determine how much of an answer is appropiate.

TheMainEvent 09-03-2005 02:43 PM

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Arial is slightly larger than Times New Roman.

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Courier New &gt; Arial &gt; Times New Roman

09-03-2005 05:43 PM

Re: \"as long as you feel it should be\"
 
Is this for college/university or for highschool?

tbach24 09-03-2005 05:51 PM

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Is this for college/university or for highschool?

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high school.

MikeNaked 09-03-2005 05:53 PM

Re: \"as long as you feel it should be\"
 
I'm a teacher...and I'm sorry.

But what your teacher is looking for (I think) is a concise yet complete answer to the prompt. Answer in complete sentences. If you can answer in a paragraph, do it. If you think it requires more exposition, 2 pages double-spaced max. No fluff, no BS. Nobody wants to read a long-winded, meandering treatise...especially if they've assigned 8 questions for homework.

tbach24 09-03-2005 05:58 PM

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I'm a teacher...and I'm sorry.

But what your teacher is looking for (I think) is a concise yet complete answer to the prompt. Answer in complete sentences. If you can answer in a paragraph, do it. If you think it requires more exposition, 2 pages double-spaced max. No fluff, no BS. Nobody wants to read a long-winded, meandering treatise...especially if they've assigned 8 questions for homework.

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Yeah. I try to do this but I just really lack the vocabulary to express things in their simplest form. Here is an example:

I'm trying to turn this
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Burr subsequently wrote a letter to Hamilton in which he asked him to explain himself. Hamilton, instead of trying to end it right then and there, went on the offensive and opened up a whole can of worms. Hamilton had implied that he could not remember everything said over “the course of a fifteen year competition.” This caused Burr to claim that Hamilton had been slanderous towards him over their entire career. Burr then went so far as to escalate the stakes by demanding an outright apology for everything Hamilton had said about him in his career.

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into something shorter and this is what I have so far:
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Burr subsequently wrote a letter to Hamilton in which he asked Hamilton to explain himself, which started off a correspondence of...

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and I really just can't find a way to represent my thoughts. They're continually escalating the stakes of the correspondence with Burr's want for Hamilton to apologize, yet Hamilton won't do what he wants and at the same time is a jackass to Burr (being demeaning). I have 8 days left to work on this so I think I'll be alright but it's certainly frusturating in the short-term.

MikeNaked 09-03-2005 06:08 PM

Re: \"as long as you feel it should be\"
 
This is a natural stage in the development of a writer. You have the technique and a decent vocabulary. Now, you are struggling w/ precision.

Don't sweat it, young blood. It's frustrating but every educated person goes through it.

Do you really need to give a blowbyblow account of how it all went down. What about a summary. How about something like "The correspondence between Burr and Hamilton begin to sour because of the grandiose egos of the two men (or something). Burr wanted [this] while Hamilton wanted [this] and neither party would budge."

tbach24 09-03-2005 06:15 PM

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Thanks.

Jdanz 09-03-2005 06:18 PM

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Burr responded to Hamilton asking him to explain himself, which prompted a spiraling escalation of each man's percieved grievances. In each response the scope of the issue widened eventually leading to Burr demanding an outright apology for everything hamilton had said about him in his career.

tbach24 09-03-2005 06:19 PM

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Burr responded to Hamilton asking him to explain himself, which prompted a spiraling escalation of each man's percieved grievances. In each response the scope of the issue widened eventually leading to Burr demanding an outright apology for everything hamilton had said about him in his career.

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You, sir, have just made my life much easier. Thanks.

Jdanz 09-03-2005 06:20 PM

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anytime.

irishpint 09-03-2005 06:22 PM

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