Re: Sweet lord, I just finished a huge project.
 

This was nice man.

Good work.

The pauses were a little long, but since it was intentional, I was cool with it.

I found it amusing. A dog watching 80s porn and Mischa Barton stops by?

You're weird dude. I like it. [img]/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

Re: Sweet lord, I just finished a huge project.
 

There was only one part I couldn't stand. I don't know animation, but I would seriously consider changing it since it just seemed completely out of place.

The guy is having a flashback telling his buddy what has happened. The dog throws the guy, he hits the ground, gets up and then in the background the flashback is over with the 2 guys talking in present time again. Yet, the animation is still in the flashback on the guy on the ground getting up and walking away.

I was left sitting here at first wondering if there was a mistake... did you forget to put the other guy in? Why isn't the guys lips moving since he's talking. I then realised you were still in the flashback.

It's just my opinion... but I thought that was really a poor choice of staying in the flashback when it's over and the present conversation is going on.

Re: Sweet lord, I just finished a huge project.
 

Cool. There needs to be more of a story though. Some very funny parts though. Also, like other said...it was slllooowww.

Re: Sweet lord, I just finished a huge project.
 

Good luck. FWIW, I think it's funny. It has that kind of nihilistic feel that you young'uns love so much. The ending...

"Yeah, I'm on it though" [img]/images/graemlins/laugh.gif[/img] [img]/images/graemlins/cool.gif[/img]

Re: Sweet lord, I just finished a huge project.
 

I liked this a lot, except for the(already mentioned) seemingly unnecessary long pauses. Very funny dialogue, and the running 50 miles conversation should get you atleast a B...Nice work.