Re: Cecil Fielder update - Plans to re-pay debt, kids not speaking to him
My grammar sucks, I should have used a hyphen and no periods at all, as it was meant to be a verbal expression, not a sentence.
For my favorite uber grammer-nazi [img]/images/graemlins/shocked.gif[/img] (remember?), how's this?
"When people misrepresent facts to cast dispersions* about people and situations which they have only limited, second hand knowledge of, it is a bummer."
*perhaps "aspersions" is more correct, but both seem to be acceptable. Not sure I like the "of" after knowledge but I think its OK. Anything else to fix?
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