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Old 07-28-2005, 05:29 PM
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Like, I'll never forget the day my daddy bought me my first Hermes bag.

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This had some potential. It would have been better had you modeled it after

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Many years later, as he faced the firing squad, Colonel Aureliano Buendia was to remember that distant afternoon when his father took him to discover ice.

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