Re: Making the Jump....33 to 55
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"Difference" as 3 syllables is questionable, Scuba.
Suggestion: "Diff'rence" + one word.
Love,
Haiku Police
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Take five syllables
Next add a line of seven
Five more makes haiku.
and, while I'm at it...
Limping pokcet pairs
EP in the fifty-fives
Is overrated.
-Coldest Call
who started doing this haiku thing as an attention getting ploy after a number of serious posts were roundly ignored...
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