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kmwpup
07-05-2004, 03:14 AM
2 of these are clearly retarded bad beats, funny thing is these 3 hands happened within 20 min and knocked me out of 3 tourney's. I had about a week or 2 of few bad beats, but it seems its back to business as usual.

I'm always looking to improve my game so any comments are appreciated.

***** Hand History for Game *****
20/40 TourneyTexasHTGameTable (NL) (Tournament) - Mon Jul 05 02:24:29 EDT 2004
Table Three Table - Table 1 (Real Money) -- Seat 10 is the button
Total number of players : 8
Seat 1: PelMell (1440)
Seat 2: willy_cox (2480)
Seat 3: dwcbroker (885)
Seat 5: dr_jello (805)
Seat 7: jeftzuck (790)
Seat 8: jhawkljw (1575)
Seat 9: Crungee (1385)
Seat 10: Hero (640)
PelMell posts small blind (10)
willy_cox posts big blind (20)
** Dealing down cards **
Dealt to Hero [ Ts, Kh ]
dwcbroker folds.
dr_jello folds.
jeftzuck folds.
jhawkljw folds.
Crungee folds.
Hero raises (70) to 70
PelMell folds.
willy_cox calls (50)
** Dealing Flop ** : [ 5c, Tc, 2d ]
willy_cox bets (2410)
willy_cox is all-In.
Hero calls (570)
Hero is all-In.
** Dealing Turn ** : [ 3d ]
** Dealing River ** : [ Ks ]
Creating Main Pot with $1290 with Hero
Creating Side Pot 1 with $1840 with willy_cox
** Summary **
Main Pot: 1290 | Side Pot 1: 1840
Board: [ 5c Tc 2d 3d Ks ]

willy_cox balance 3130, bet 2480, collected 3130, net +650 [ Ac 4d ] [ a straight, ace to five -- Ac,5c,4d,3d,2d ]

Hero balance 0, lost 640 [ Ts Kh ] [ two pairs, kings and tens -- Kh,Ks,Ts,Tc,5c ]

I raised preflop with a mediorce hand because of my position and everyone folded. I think I played this hand fine and that bastard got lucky with his dumb play.



***** Hand History for Game *****
15/30 TourneyTexasHTGameTable (NL) (Tournament) - Mon Jul 05 02:29:59 EDT 2004
Table Three Table -Table 1 (Real Money) -- Seat 3 is the button
Total number of players : 10
Seat 1: fazer33 (1000)
Seat 2: Hero (1000)
Seat 3: LanceWins6 (985)
Seat 4: BlindSided (985)
Seat 5: bee255 (1000)
Seat 6: downalot (1000)
Seat 7: Sluggo43 (1000)
Seat 8: kings21 (1045)
Seat 9: GREEKO19 (985)
Seat 10: Kchief (1000)
BlindSided posts small blind (10)
bee255 posts big blind (15)
** Dealing down cards **
Dealt to Hero [ As, Kc ]
downalot folds.
Sluggo43 calls (15)
kings21 folds.
GREEKO19 calls (15)
Kchief raises (45) to 45
fazer33 calls (45)
Hero calls (45)
LanceWins6 calls (45)
BlindSided folds.
bee255 folds.
Sluggo43 calls (30)
GREEKO19 calls (30)
** Dealing Flop ** : [ Ac, 3d, 2h ]
Sluggo43 checks.
GREEKO19 checks.
Kchief checks.
fazer33 checks.
Hero bets (250)
LanceWins6 folds.
Sluggo43 calls (250)
GREEKO19 folds.
Kchief folds.
fazer33 folds.
** Dealing Turn ** : [ 2c ]
Sluggo43 checks.
Hero bets (705)
Hero is all-In.
Sluggo43 calls (705)
Sluggo43 is all-In.
** Dealing River ** : [ 7d ]
Creating Main Pot with $2205 with Hero,Sluggo43
** Summary **
Main Pot: 2205
Board: [ Ac 3d 2h 2c 7d ]

Hero balance 0, lost 1000 [ As Kc ] [ two pairs, aces and twos -- As,Ac,Kc,2h,2c ]

Sluggo43 balance 2205, bet 1000, collected 2205, net +1205 [ 7h Ah ] [ two pairs, aces and sevens -- Ah,Ac,7h,7d,3d ]


I think I played this hand fairly well, but am open to comments.



I don't feel like looking for the third hand, but I hit 2 pair with A-10 and a guy with A-Q hit his bellybuster draw on the river. I bet it hard and had all but my last 200 in the pot before the river so even though I had a feeling that jerk hit the straight I was pot-commited as I planned on being.

they were all $30 buy in tourneys on party.

all comments are appreciated.