View Full Version : Come up with a clever phrase, get $25
jacki
12-15-2005, 11:49 PM
I'll split a $50 prize if someone here can come up with a title for a new feature being started at my newspaper.
Here's the description of the feature:
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Starting next week, the State Journal will add a list of five fast facts on page one meant to help busy readers digest news quickly.
The feature will serve double duty, giving readers with limited time some basics on the news of the day, while helping other readers find more in-depth coverage throughout the paper. The feature will run Monday through Friday because it is aimed at busy weekday readers.
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Fast Five has already been shot down.
I'll submit every reasonable idea posted in the this thread, and if your (my) entry is the winner, I'll split the prize with you.
bills217
12-15-2005, 11:55 PM
Five for the Drive.
(to work?)
young nut
12-15-2005, 11:55 PM
"Fiveline"
MonkeeMan
12-15-2005, 11:56 PM
Fact Attack
Speed Read
Five Inside
deadmoney98
12-15-2005, 11:57 PM
Flash Five or maybe Five in a Flash
HoldingFolding
12-15-2005, 11:58 PM
Five Live
or
Live Five
tolbiny
12-15-2005, 11:59 PM
five fast facts
Hmmmm?
How about "the fast five" - How do i come up with these things?
Sooga
12-16-2005, 12:01 AM
Fact Force Five
jacki
12-16-2005, 12:03 AM
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Fact Force Five
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This would be my winner so far.
But remember, this is for a daily newspaper. We're going for creative, but not too creative.
utmt40
12-16-2005, 12:05 AM
I like "Take Five" the best.
Fact Force Five was atop my list of the dumbest in the thread, and it wasnt even close.
I really like Take Five, too. Fits.
Sooga
12-16-2005, 12:07 AM
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Fact Force Five
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This would be my winner so far.
But remember, this is for a daily newspaper. We're going for creative, but not too creative.
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Then I guess I'd submit something more current like 'Fantastic Five' or something
jacki
12-16-2005, 12:12 AM
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Fact Force Five was atop my list of the dumbest in the thread, and it wasnt even close.
I really like Take Five, too. Fits.
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It's a play on Fox Force Five, from Pulp Fiction. And Take Five is so vanilla, it just might win.
Does it have to have five in the title?
Assuming they are in bullet point format, how about "Bullet News"
bills217
12-16-2005, 12:15 AM
Dive for Five.
Klepton
12-16-2005, 12:17 AM
Not Cliff's Notes.
jacki
12-16-2005, 12:17 AM
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Does it have to have five in the title?
Assuming they are in bullet point format, how about "Bullet News"
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No
and No.
housenuts
12-16-2005, 12:22 AM
V Card
NEWS TO BOOT
why!? because people wear boots when the read the news!... plus the rhyme..
Five facts, fortified with fiber.
dblgutshot
12-16-2005, 12:27 AM
Five for Fighting
World at a glance (or change world with your state/city)
Your World in 5
eviljeff
12-16-2005, 12:34 AM
(The) Fiver
Think Five
(The) One Through Five
Speed Read
Sum Five
(The) Front Five
Act Five
Give it Five
Fivel Goes West
This Journal for Dummies
What if someday they want to change it to 3, 4, or 6 or 7? including the number is old and cliche.
chesspain
12-16-2005, 12:35 AM
News For Retards
eviljeff
12-16-2005, 12:35 AM
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What if someday they want to change it to 3, 4, or 6 or 7? including the number is old and cliche.
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this is by far the worst submission so far
PoBoy321
12-16-2005, 12:35 AM
Newsflash, it's simple, it's easy, and it cuts to the hard of the matter.
eviljeff
12-16-2005, 12:37 AM
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Newsflash, it's simple, it's easy, and it cuts to the hard of the matter.
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I was going to say "I'll cut your heart", but then I realized you butchered the expression
Not to sound like I am campaigning, but in case you are not familiar: Take Five is also an allusion to the jazz album by Dave Brubek. I am not very knowledgeable in jazz, but most consider it a “masterpiece” I believe.
istewart
12-16-2005, 12:37 AM
Five and ten, without the ten. Or the and.
DangerGoodson
12-16-2005, 12:41 AM
is this the Wisconsin State Journal or Cap times?
lastchance
12-16-2005, 12:47 AM
Daily Digest
jacki
12-16-2005, 12:47 AM
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is this the Wisconsin State Journal or Cap times?
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State Journal
Stuey
12-16-2005, 12:59 AM
Cave Window
housenuts
12-16-2005, 01:12 AM
QuintEssential News
just send me the $25
BradleyT
12-16-2005, 01:22 AM
Flop, Turn, River
OtisTheMarsupial
12-16-2005, 02:03 AM
Cheat Sheet
Quick Bits
News Flash
Pieces
Bitesize News
Cup O'News
Speed Read
MonkeeMan
12-16-2005, 02:09 AM
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Cheat Sheet
Quick Bits
News Flash
Pieces
Bitesize News
Cup O'News
Speed Read
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you and eviljeff aren't quick enough for Speed Read, better luck next time.
Andrew Fletcher
12-16-2005, 02:16 AM
"The Decline of Modern Journalism"
tl;wr
(too lazy; won't read)
Jdanz
12-16-2005, 02:22 AM
tl; dr
edit: damn goes that long with no one saying it and a minute before i get it in....
ononimo
12-16-2005, 02:41 AM
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QuintEssential News
just send me the $25
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agreed
LondonBroil
12-16-2005, 03:09 AM
"Read this [censored] news now or your gonna [censored] die"
housenuts
12-16-2005, 03:17 AM
a little bit of an anger problem?
eviljeff
12-16-2005, 12:39 PM
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QuintEssential News
just send me the $25
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this is way too intelligent for the average reader
trying2learn
12-16-2005, 01:02 PM
Fast News
news-on-the-go
The Water Cooler
things you should know
Fast Happenings
housenuts
12-16-2005, 01:07 PM
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QuintEssential News
just send me the $25
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this is way too intelligent for the average reader
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oh ya, i forgot it was an american paper. /images/graemlins/smile.gif
4_2_it
12-16-2005, 01:08 PM
In Brief
Read These and You Wont Look Stupid, Stupid
DoomSlice
12-16-2005, 01:16 PM
The Doomsday Digest
Sideline Snippets
News Shorts
Short News
The Terse Times
News "for Dummies"
Rushed Reader News
The Busy Man's Bugle
Short on Time?
Why Buy the Newspaper when you Can Just Read This?
DrSavage
12-16-2005, 01:21 PM
Inside
nyc999
12-16-2005, 01:23 PM
Talking Points
tonypaladino
12-16-2005, 01:24 PM
Enjoy!
jaxUp
12-16-2005, 01:26 PM
Quick Picks
bwana devil
12-16-2005, 01:28 PM
"who's so damn busy he can only read 5 bullet points, you freakin' moron? you think youre more important than everyone else? [censored] you."
jacki
12-16-2005, 01:32 PM
Thanks guys!
I've compiled and submitted most of these.
I'll let you know how it turns out.
My favorites that actually have a chance of winning are:
QuintEssential News and Water Cooler
"Back in Five"
Show me the money
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Thanks guys!
I've compiled and submitted most of these.
I'll let you know how it turns out.
My favorites that actually have a chance of winning are:
QuintEssential News and Water Cooler
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QuintEssential News is very clever. (I think it might be too clever for the target market, though.) Wouldn’t mind losing (Take Five) to this one at all.
ononimo
12-16-2005, 01:59 PM
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QuintEssential News is very clever. (I think it might be too clever for the target market, though.)
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it's really depressing to think that this play on words could be beyond the comprehension of the average reader. i really hope that's not true.
CrazyEyez
12-16-2005, 02:37 PM
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QuintEssential News is very clever. (I think it might be too clever for the target market, though.)
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it's really depressing to think that this play on words could be beyond the comprehension of the average reader. i really hope that's not true.
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Keep in mind we're talking about Wisconsin.
6 out of 10 will comprehend the word "quintessential."
3 out of 10 will get the "quint" part.
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QuintEssential News is very clever. (I think it might be too clever for the target market, though.)
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it's really depressing to think that this play on words could be beyond the comprehension of the average reader. i really hope that's not true.
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Keep in mind the target audience is folk who want their news in Five Easy Pieces. Hey, not a bad idea for the title. Might be too late.
Dude, you should send this in yourself and make the 50 bucks.
QuintEssential News is by far the best and I am ashamed I didn't come up with it myself.
QR:
Don't bother with a title. Instead of numbers, just start each line with the following:
o
r
l
y
?
~D
MonkeeMan
12-16-2005, 05:38 PM
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Thanks guys!
I've compiled and submitted most of these.
I'll let you know how it turns out.
My favorites that actually have a chance of winning are:
QuintEssential News and Water Cooler
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When is the decision being made? I need that $25 for Christmas shopping.
eviljeff
12-16-2005, 05:48 PM
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QuintEssential News is very clever.
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perhaps too clever by half
jacki
12-16-2005, 06:56 PM
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Thanks guys!
I've compiled and submitted most of these.
I'll let you know how it turns out.
My favorites that actually have a chance of winning are:
QuintEssential News and Water Cooler
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When is the decision being made? I need that $25 for Christmas shopping.
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The feature starts in Monday's paper, so the decision is likely to be made before the end of the day today.
Your Morning Quincunx
Be sure to arrange the entries correctly. Ths is also good because it doesn't really imply that there is an ordering of importance.
~D
Is it too late?
"Featured Five" - Top Stories of the Day.
NutzyClutz
12-16-2005, 09:40 PM
Hark!
Pentegram
Eventions
Forward Five (state motto)
Cheese Wheel
Wifive (ooh a internet demographic reference)
Just Enough
Daily Dose
Single Serving News
henrikrh
12-17-2005, 06:25 AM
"5 things the President f-cked up today..."
jacki
12-18-2005, 03:17 PM
Nobody wins.
The winning selection was .....
Five on the Fly.
Meh.
housenuts
12-19-2005, 02:37 PM
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The winning selection was .....
Five on the Fly.
Meh.
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booooo! QuintEssential News was probably the best thing I've ever come up with in my life
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Nobody wins.
The winning selection was .....Five on the Fly.
Meh.
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Pathetic. Do they have a zipper next to the title?
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The winning selection was .....
Five on the Fly.
Meh.
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booooo! QuintEssential News was probably the best thing I've ever come up with in my life
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Well, be content that you have kudos and accolades from those of us on the forum who appreciate your (budding) genius.
RJT
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