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Dead
03-31-2005, 08:07 PM
Finished with frisbee
Girls in nice bikini tops
College kicks much ass
iMsoLucky0
03-31-2005, 08:10 PM
Great post.

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JKetzer
03-31-2005, 08:14 PM
It's like 45 outside. And raining. Again.

You don't live in Pennsylvania for the weather.
Dead
03-31-2005, 08:15 PM
It's the same here... now. But around 2pm, it was nice and sunny. We played frisbee outside of my hall, and the girls were just looking beautiful.

They were sunning themselves.
tolbiny
03-31-2005, 08:32 PM
Dude it was even sunny in ohio today... windy and cold this afternoon, but sunny! One out of three ain't bad.
NLSoldier
03-31-2005, 09:03 PM
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It's like 45 outside. And raining. Again.

You don't live in Pennsylvania for the weather.

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75 and VERY sunny in San Diego /images/graemlins/cool.gif
handsome
03-31-2005, 09:04 PM
[ QUOTE ]
75 and VERY sunny in San Diego /images/graemlins/cool.gif

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I hate you.
Dead
03-31-2005, 09:06 PM
You're gorgeous.
The Yugoslavian
03-31-2005, 09:11 PM
[ QUOTE ]
Finished with <font color="red"> basketball </font>
Girls in nice bikini tops
<font color="red"> Orange County </font> kicks much ass

[/ QUOTE ]

Now that's more like it.

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Yugoslav
KingMarc
03-31-2005, 09:37 PM
[ QUOTE ]
[ QUOTE ]
Finished with <font color="red"> basketball </font>
Girls in nice bikini tops
<font color="red"> Orange County </font> kicks much ass

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Now that's more like it.



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You can say that again.
Dead
03-31-2005, 09:48 PM
Pshhh. /images/graemlins/smirk.gif /images/graemlins/laugh.gif
tek
04-01-2005, 01:50 AM
Played tourney tonight

All in with King Jack Offsuit

Pair of tens held up /images/graemlins/frown.gif
GrekeHaus
04-01-2005, 02:36 AM
[ QUOTE ]
[ QUOTE ]
Finished with <font color="red"> basketball </font>
Girls in nice bikini tops
<font color="red"> Orange County </font> kicks much ass

[/ QUOTE ]

Now that's more like it.

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Yugoslav

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Both your first and last lines have 6 syllables.
Dead
04-01-2005, 02:50 AM
The last line has 7. /images/graemlins/smirk.gif
GrekeHaus
04-01-2005, 03:42 AM
I was counting Orange as one syllable, but the important thing is...it's not a haiku.
Matty
04-01-2005, 04:22 AM
Haikus are about nature
You're trying to make a Senryu.