How do these starting hands by position look?

[Kips Bay Kid]

If this should go in the beginner's forum, I apologize - I am trying to help a friend out by giving him some advice to tighten up his play, I told him to lay off the suited connectors for now, only play strong hands and hammer the pot. Also I told him to play any pairs if he can get to see the flop for cheap otherwise fold the low ones in EP if the table is aggressive PF. I'd appreciate any advice if you see any of this as drastically off (sorry to sponge).

------- EP --------
AA 2.32 521,324
KK 1.67 522,652
QQ 1.22 520,663
JJ 0.86 521,866
AK s 0.78 348,364
AQ s 0.59 348,759
TT 0.58 520,705
AK 0.51 1,048,008
AJ s 0.44 348,126
KQ s 0.39 346,772
99 0.38 522,454
AT s 0.32 348,013
AQ 0.31 1,042,962
------- MP --------
KJ s 0.29 346,582
88 0.25 521,972
QJ s 0.23 348,870 - Only in multi-way pots
KT s 0.20 348,774
A9 s 0.19 348,992
AJ 0.19 1,045,857
QT s 0.17 346,115 - Only in multi-way pots
KQ 0.16 1,045,069
77 0.16 524,345
JT s 0.15 348,235 - cautiously play
------- LP --------
A8 s 0.10 349,431
K9 s 0.09 348,286 - cautiously play
AT 0.08 1,047,289
A5 s 0.08 348,544
A7s 0.08 349,949
KJ 0.08 1,047,098 - cautiously play
66 0.07 520,946
------ DNP -------- - exception if the table is very passive
T9 s 0.05 348,264
A4 s 0.05 347,862
Q9 s 0.05 348,760
J9 s 0.04 349,965
QJ 0.03 1,044,338
A6 s 0.03 347,677
55 0.02 521,945
A3 s 0.02 347,895
K8 s 0.01 350,401
KT 0.01 1,045,392

[DMBFan23]

that seems fairly reasonable (absent of my critiquing every choice), but you should make a distinction for your friend about playing in raised versus unraised pots - you have to tighten up a lot if there's been a raise before you enter. AJ offsuit is a good example here, if I'm first in I raise, if there's a raise before me I muck.

[siccjay]

I think it's a little tight for low limit but its good for a beginner I guess.